Posted by: Jeffrey Payne | November 30, 2009

Generation Kill

As my blog’s vast legion of readers will know, this blog isn’t exactly high volume. I’d rather let my work speak for itself rather than publish every aspect of its development and my dietary habits while writing it. My Twitter followers and Facebook friends will know that I like to broadcast wordcounts, but that’s about it. By contrast, I have no qualms about gushing about my woodworking projects, but since I’ve been focused almost exclusively on my new book lately there hasn’t been much of that in recent months. Then it occured to me that what I can do is blog about what I’m reading instead of what I’m writing. So, we’ll try that for a while and see if it sticks…

My current work in progress, Far From the War, concerns a modern military conflict. To get a better feel for the modern armed forces, I’ve been doing a fair amount of research. One small part of this research was to read Generation Kill by Evan Wright. I’d seen the HBO mini-series, so I was prepped going in for a lot of it. Even so, I’m a sucker for details (one of my favorite non-fiction books is The Making of the Atomic Bomb by Richard Rhodes, which is a detail lover’s paradise), so I expected to get much more out of the book than I did out of the mini-series. I wasn’t disappointed.

A small distraction, both when I watched the mini-series and when reading the book, was that I actually know one of the people in it. Rudy Reyes, known as “Fruity Rudy” in the book (and who recently published his own book, a memoir of sorts called Hero Living), actually attended the same high school as I did. I didn’t really know him very well, still don’t. We were in a high school production of South Pacific together and that’s about it. All I remember about him from high school was that he removed his shirt at every opportunity. From reading Generation Kill, it seems like this habit has endured.

Anyway, Generation Kill is a compelling work of non-fiction that covers Rolling Stone Reporter Evan Wright’s experiences while embedded with a Marine Recon unit during the invasion of Iraq. Wright’s prose clips along nicely and keeps you engaged. I haven’t read of a lot of stuff — at least not recently — written in present tense, so it was edifying to see that style used effectively.

As I read the book, two general impressions took hold. The first was the indiscriminate killing of civilians. We’re fed a lot of stuff about surgical strikes, smart bombs and what-have-you, and I have no doubt that this technology saves a lot of lives. But it doesn’t save all the lives. The vast majority of civilians killed in Iraq were not killed intentionally. They were not executed. They just happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time. In Generation Kill, Wright talks of seeing headless civilians, dead children and unimaginable gore everywhere, often with dogs dining on the corpses. It’s unrelenting and hard to believe. If it weren’t non-fiction, you’d be tempted to dismiss it as gratuitous hyperbole. As I considered how I’m going to depict this kind of violence in Far From the War, I realized that there’s not much I could conceive of, no level of pathos or gore that would be unrealistic. In fact, I felt a distinct need to understate the level of violence and gore in order to make it believable. I’m just not sure readers would take a realistic depiction of warfare as credible fiction.

The second major impression I drew from the book concerns the incompetence of officers, particularly two officers referred to in the book as Encino Man and Captain America. (Lt. Fick is a notable exception.) There are stories about Captain America bayonetting prisoners and generally freaking out as though he were acting out scenes from old war movies instead of actually participating in one. As a veteran of the armed forces myself, I personally think that if the military expects enlisted men to obey orders without a moment’s hesitation, they owe the enlisted men leaders worthy of their respect. When I read that Captain America was returned to command after being suspended several times for what amount to light war crimes and gross incompetence, I began to wonder whether or not Marine Corps officers are as elite as we’d all like to believe. Don’t get me wrong. I support the military, but anybody in a position to order people to their deaths has to be held to a higher standard. If standards aren’t enforced, they become more like guidelines. When that happens, mediocrity is sure to follow.

Overall, I think the book underscores how clueless the average American is about what these guys go through over there. We really haven’t a clue. I’ve been pretty down on “kids these days” who I’ve often derided as unproductive video game addicted buffoons doing everything they can to destroy our GDP from the comfort of their Futons. The Marines depicted in Generation Kill and by extension everyone serving in Iraq (and Afghanistan) go through things every day we couldn’t possibly imagine. We’re basically a bunch of whiny clueless lightweights compared to these guys. The contrast between these guys and the people sitting at home eating Doritos and playing Guitar Hero is striking. It makes you all the more disgusted at the idle man-boys, but at least grateful to know that they aren’t the whole picture.

Posted by: Jeffrey Payne | November 19, 2009

The Wavy Line Due Out in Spring of 2010

I’m please to announce that my first novel, The Wavy Line, will be coming out in trade paperback and various electronic formats in spring of 2010. The publisher is a small indie house called Uprising Media Group. They focus primarily on electronic distribution although the book will still be distributed through all the major bookstores and amazon.

Right now we’re working on finalizing a draft for copyediting and cover design concepts. Stay tuned.

Posted by: Jeffrey Payne | October 24, 2009

New Playlist Additions

So far as my book is concerned, the war has officially started and to honor the commencement of hostilities, I’ve added a few new songs to the playlist.

They are…

  • This Mortal Coil – Song to the Siren
  • Sisters of Mercy – Colours
Posted by: Jeffrey Payne | September 28, 2009

The Writing Playlist

I have a habit of creating playlists that I listen to while I’m writing that put me in an appropriate mood for whatever tone or theme I’m going for and my current project is no exception.

So, I give you the Far From the War playlist. In case you couldn’t tell from the title, my current project is about war, suffering and death – oh, and did I mention it’s for teenagers? To say the playlist is slightly moody is a bit of an understatement. I advise you all to download these and let these songs bum you out until my words in print have a chance to do so. Enjoy.

  • Tori Amos – Bells For Her
  • Siouxsie and the Banshees – Dazzle
  • Fiction Plane – Hate
  • Echo and the Bunnymen – The Killing Moon
  • Concrete Blonde – God Is a Bullet
  • Depeche Mode – Fly On the Windscreen
  • Front 242 – Headhunter
  • Jimmi Hendrix – If 6 Was 9
  • Jenny Lewis – Pretty Bird
  • Nick Drake – Fly
  • The Sundays – I Feel
  • Simon and Garfunkle – April Come She Will
  • Jose Gonzales – Heartbeats
  • Massive Attack – Teardrop
  • The Smiths – How Soon Is Now?
  • U2 – Running To a Stand Still
  • The Sundays – I Kicked a Boy
  • Portishead – Wondering Star
  • Tori Amos – Yes, Anatasia
  • Regina Spektor – Laughing With
Posted by: Jeffrey Payne | September 23, 2009

Introducing Far From the War

I sent off the last full requested on The Wavy Line yesterday and am now at liberty to write the next book without loose ends for the last book weighing me down.  I currently have three fulls outstanding and one partial still pending a response from Lucienne Diver.  She seems cool, so I shall keep my fingers crossed…

In the meantime, work has officially started on my next novel, Far From the War.  This is not a sequel to The Wavy Line.  This one starts a new series and is very different.  For openers, it’s not science fiction and I’m sort of writing it with a view to being a YA/Adult crossover series.  There’s considerable debate about what exactly makes a novel YA.  I’ve chosen not to worry about that too much.  My protagonist is a 17 year old girl, but other than that I’m not going to write it any differently.  I won’t assume my reader has any real knowledge of the Federal Reserve or the International Monetary Fund, but that’s where I draw the line.

I’m excited about this one.  It’s going to be dark and fatalistic.  Morrissey fans should love it.

Updates here, as they always are, will be infrequent.  Watch my Facebook status for up to the minute word counts.

Posted by: Jeffrey Payne | August 10, 2009

Jamaican Independence Day

The deck was built just in time for my much hyped Jamaican Independence Day celebration.  We had a good turnout and the deck did not collapse.  A few snaps from the event follow.  We’ll start with the grill area for which I built a pair of matching prep tables from the leftover lumber.jid1

Here’s a wider view showing the picnic table and benches, also built from extra wood.

jid2

Here’s another angle that shows the notch we left our for the tree and a few cases of Red Stripe icing down the buckets.

jid3The grill in use.

jid4

Kathryn enjoying an adult beverage.

jid5So there you go.  No more parties or projects for at least a month or so.  Once I get the final draft of The Wavy Line out the door, I might consider a walnut coffee table.  Stay tuned.

Posted by: Jeffrey Payne | August 10, 2009

Deck in the City

So, the big project of the summer finally happened thanks to the help of Graham and Jason.  Here we are pondering the framing…

deck1Here you can see many deck blocks and more framing…

deck2Here we stand atop the completed frame…

deck3Here the decking is almost complete…

deck4And now we’re all done…

deck5As it turns out, my mother is a little miffed that I didn’t develop a penchant for this stuff until relocation to Seattle.  I don’t know what to tell her other than buying a house must have activated some latent manliness genes.

Posted by: Jeffrey Payne | July 11, 2009

The Complete Unit and Music Driven Gestation

The corner unit now has an adjoining DVD shelf. I finished this a few weeks ago and have just now gotten around to taking pictures.
complete-unit
I actually built this unit twice because the stain for the first attempt didn’t match. Ironically enough, the stain came from the very same can. I changed the design the second time around to include the open space in the center, which I think is cool and breaks up what might have otherwise been just a plain old shelf.
unit-with-fireplace
Shifting gears a bit, a lot of writers like to keep their Kimono wide open and blog about every little aspect of their creative process every day. In general I find that kind of thing a little gushy and self indulgent if done too often, particularly if you’re unpublished and have no sound reason to believe anyone would find your creative process interesting.
With that disclaimer and advance apology out of the way, I can say that I’ve learned a few things about how I work over the past few weeks. Since The Wavy Line was my first book, I can’t really claim to know that much about my process yet. I have learned that I don’t like editing that much. I like writing a first draft because you can let your enthusiasm for the project (inspiration, if you like) just carry you along and before you know it you’re staring at 150,000 words.
It’s not that I mind editing in principal or that I feel I’m not good at it. It’s just by that time, I have this backlog of energy building up for the next project (or the next two or three projects) and I desperately want to get past project A and move onto project B. This is dangerous for me right now because I have full requests pending on Project A and haven’t sent them off yet. I’ll be finishing up the last pass through The Wavy Line this weekend and will be able to move on to other projects, one of which I am particularly excited about.

Last night Kathryn and I went to the kick off of Tori Amos’ North American Tour.  She played a relatively obscure song off her Under the Pink album called Bells for Her.  I knew the song and being reminded of it helped crystalize the tone for one of the projects in my hopper.  I won’t go into details except to say that the project is called Far From the War.  It’s arguably YA/adult crossover and deals with a 17 year old protagonist trying to survive in the midst of a present day civil war.  Even though it deals with war and political themes, because it’s told from the perspective of someone not directly involved with politics or waging the war, it will not read like a political thriller.  It will be dark, upsetting and very, very sad.  Bells for Her, more than any other song, captures perfectly how I want the book to “feel”.  Whether I succeed at pulling this off or not is another issue, but it’s very encouraging to have such a clear vision of what you’re trying to achieve.

I suggest that my many readers hit up iTunes and download it immediately.

Posted by: Jeffrey Payne | June 10, 2009

…Another Begins

Like all of the finer things in life, this project begins with my custom built dado jig.  It cuts perfect dados for shelving using nothing more than a handheld router a a few clamps.

fun-with-routers

Next we get out the glue, the clamps and start the fun part…

assembly-in-progress

All done…

completed-assembly

Notice the opening the looks as though it might conveniently fit over a poorly placed vent?  Trust me, it’s there.  Next time we’ll sand and stain to match the corner shelf.

Posted by: Jeffrey Payne | June 10, 2009

One Project Ends…

After some sanding and three coats of polyurathane, behold the corner shelf unit finally nestled into its corner.done

You may notice that it looks a little unbalanced.  What it needs is another matching shelf coming off the right side.

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